goodbye my honey, for trigun fans

[greenapplesodaex]

if you've watched trigun, you'd know what this is

this is not finished yet, just a outline

i've been wanting to do this pic for a looooong time. i was gonna paint it in art class, but the teacher wouldnt let me... but now i'm free and have a tablet, so ha!

I want this pic to be perfect. so before i go any father, i'd like everyone to point out flaws, thank you very much!!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/greenapplesodaex/wolfwood.jpg

p.s. this will be my first fan art

[Tony]

The hand seems to be too big..

and I would use a smaller brush size for folds than for the outline.

[greenapplesodaex]

tony wrote:

and I would use a smaller brush size for folds than for the outline.

y is that?

[Tony]

Different kind of detail?

I'm not sure.. I guess that's just coming from my own style of choice.

[ssr]

nicely drawn indeed
a bit more detail adn focus more on the lightarea
sell it