The Diary of an Angst-filled Drama Queen

[jonos]

nice poem, but someone please lock this topic, im gonna commit suicide any minute!!!!

[Dauntless]

That's always heartwarming to hear. I mean, that's always like having the fiery hellhounds of hell (redundancy is good in angst) snap at the heels of your sorrow/innocence.

At least we know we've served our purpose.

[jonos]

i feel of suicide every time dauntless utters his words,
my hands flow over my blood stained keyboard,
the blood is from my rists,
i lick my rists because i am a vampire,
i belong in hell because i fornicate with animals,
when i am in teh form of one.
does no person know of my pain,
i drove a steak through my heart,
but it was cow, and not wooden,
i am an idiot.
i am an immortal vampire and i cannot be killed.
when will my pain end,
i shot myself with a gold bullet,
when i forgot that its a silver bullet.
i am a disgrace!

[Mazer]

Roses are red, like blood
Violets are blue, like the bruises I get from throwing myself down the stairs after reading jonos' posts
I'm no good at poetry
And neither are you

(I'm kidding)

[jonos]

now i am going to commit suicide!!!!

im not serious about what i write in this, it takes me probably 30 seconds and idon't put too much thought in it, so i don't really care if you think it sucks, because i think it sucks!!!! but if you say that it sucks then i will just hvae to write some more.

[Dauntless]

**** the world
with its corporate marketry
Kids today rife with indecency
So caught up in your politicin'
So blind you can't see you're trippin'
Girls just in their teens
Trying already to be fashion queens
Big America trying to change the world
Liberated countries where U.S. flags unfurl
We really need to ask what's the motivation
Greed and corruption only feeds my agitation
What is a country with no values doing
"saving the day" when the media is screwing
with the people of today with shock advertisement
SARS, mad cow, anthrax,West Nile, terrorists
All excuses for Big Brother to look over your shoulder
People today don't even stop to think
Sex sells, and people listen to whatever is told to them
The growth of indecency and hypocrisy is quadratic
We legalize drugs cuz teenagers already have it
One thing feeds on another, and soon we're Sodom and Gomorrah
What's the world going to be like when you wake up tomorrow
Pedestrian tactics won't help you save the world
Overzeal and deception won't help you save the world
The answer is not to legalize or invade
Think it out if you want to make a change

Well then.

[Dauntless]

Visit here again, people...new recruits. Tell your friends

[jonos]

Why must we sit and watch,
While Spain rots to the dogs,
As cowardice and ill feelings
Run rampant in all the EU's dealings,
We must stand for what we believe in,
And not fall down to those who call us heathens,
Only 4 countries can lead,
In truth and protect other's greed,
And make it safe for the other,
Countries to come in after,
And eat up the economic deals,
While those who liberated sit and reel,
Do we want them to become isolationist,
Because they will help when the anti christ,
Comes again to wreak havoc,
Among the ignorant whores we are,
While we sit and watch those countries bar,
Our cowardly asses from their dealings,
we sit and moan because we have feeling,
Now, but not when they needed our help,
We have failed the world and those who lead us from hell...

[templest]

Quote:

pathetic fallacy is when a character exaggerates traits in nature so that they believe it is talking to them through symbolism / teen poet gets stuff out of nowhere (darkness...what darkness?).

I haven't read further to see if anyone has corrected this, but last time I checked.. pathetic fallacy was when the environment adjusts to the mood of the situation? ie: horses going insane, thunderstorms, ect in Macbeth?

yep, did a google search:
pathetic fallacy: an expression that endows inanimate things with human feelings.

Not flamebait. Just a little commentary.

[Dauntless]

Huh. Well I guess I got the wrong idea from English class.

[naoki]

Templest is correct on his definition.

You could have the darkness surround a person and swirl about him, to "add" to his sense of confusion.

[templest]

let's give it a shot... **ahem**

Bitter Heart... Lost love... and Ruined Innosense.

The deep darkness of my cold black heart hurts,
I feel do lonely and the pain from those jerks,
no one understands how I feel,
only I know that it's real,
I am invisible to many eyes,
no one cares so I just don't try,
every morning I wake up and breath,
feeling like a lost dove,
everyday I feel so naive,
for once believing that it was me she loved,
now that this love has come and gone,
why do I still feel so wrong?
This poem makes no sense,
but neither does your mom.

-Templest

[Dauntless]

Hear hear, a new recruit.
Welcome, brother Templest.
Templest, ooh-ha-ha!


It's not fucking easy being green
The things people say are fucking obscene
It's like, everyday people practice being mean
On me; it's not even funny

I never asked to be this particular shade
How come all the black white and yellow guys get laid?
I'll just sit here and fade
into nothingness...brutal nothingness

You think French guys have it tough
Being called a frog is barely rough
If you're not one you don't know nearly enough
about the world of pain that I live in.


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[jonos]

You think that you're lives are shit and do not matter,
But you haven't taken the shit I take as i hear the cool-kid's laughter,
I walk past in my black nailpolish and greasy hair,
With my white skin I don't fit in with them there.

I wish I was black because then I would fit,
Then I could rap and not have to take this shit,
I'd rather be a coward and a frog,
Then live with myself, a wet dog.

You think you're being tortured because you're green,
But Toad, you haven't been white like me or unclean,
I cut my fingers so they are scarred like I play guitar,
Cause I can't afford a plastic one because I'm a retard.

I can't find a job because of my clothes,
And because of the AK-47 under my trench-coat,
One day I might as well snap,
Blow some fucking brains so I don't have to take this crap.