[FP] My jetman game completly finished and done.

[adigamov]

Hello
thank you Compsci community. you have helped me a great deal in my game.
I just got back my mark for the game and i got a 100. Thank you all and now
here is my game for you to try.

BTW i would like it to be rated based on bits and everything. I worked really hard on this and would like to be criticized.

[Carey]

There is a problem with the arrow sprite. It creates a bunch of black lines under it when you move up (@speed 5+). Also you should add velocity to the calculations so the jet behaves more like a jet (flows smoothly up and down instead of jerkily). Your grammar could also use some work. So there's my criticism. Overall not a bad game. I made one of these myself a while ago. Its somewhere on this site.

[fishtastic]

Cool, played this game somewhere before.

Use picmerge instead of piccopy so the things wouldn't show a rectangle.

[Carey]

a white rectangle around the sprites he means. Be careful, this could cause your game to slow down.