FF06 trying to make a new RPG would like help

[BlackDragon989]

need feed back.

code:

% Bryan's World Of FF06 var numFrames : int := Pic.Frames ("M:/TIK/11.gif") var pics, pics1 : array 1 .. 16 of int var delayTime, delayTime1 : int var keys : array char of boolean %using keys var x, x1, y1, y, xSize, ySize : int var font, font2 : int var position : int var name : int var number1, number2, number3, number4 : int var characterHP, character2HP, character2MP, characterMP, characterTP, character2TP : int characterHP := 9999 character2HP := 9999 characterMP := 100 character2MP := 100 characterTP := 100 character2TP := 100 x := 10 y := 10 x1 := 10 y1 := 10 xSize := 10 ySize := 10 number1 := Rand.Int (50, 100) number2 := Rand.Int (800, 1500) font := Font.New ("serif:15") font2 := Font.New ("serif:85") View.Set ("offscreenonly") put "**********************************************************************" put "** Welcome to the World Of Final Fantasy 06.                        **" put "** The game you are about to play is based on the 11 Final Fantasy. **" put "** The Main story line for this is Cloud is looking for Magus the   **" put "** bad end boss on his way he must fight and level his way throught **" put "** different areas.                                                 **" put "** hit 'o' if your a new player                                     **" put "**********************************************************************" Draw.Text ("Final Fantasy", 20, 170, font2, black) View.Update delay (6000) cls % var picID : int % var x2, y2 : int % % picID := Pic.FileNew ("M:/TIK/worldmap.gif") % for i : 1 .. 50 %     x2 := Rand.Int (0, maxx) %     y2 := Rand.Int (0, maxy) %     Pic.Draw (picID, x2, y2, picCopy) % end for % Pic.Free (picID) % delay (8000) % Load the picture Pic.FileNewFrames ("M:/TIK/11.gif", pics, delayTime) %Pic.FileNewFrames ("C:/Documents and Settings/Mom_2/Desktop/Turing/cloud.gif", pics, delayTime) Pic.FileNewFrames ("M:/TIK/cloud.gif", pics1, delayTime1) %Pic.FileNewFrames ("C:/Documents and Settings/Mom_2/Desktop/Turing/magus.gif", pics1, delayTime1) % Draw the background black Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green) % Create the sprite var sprite, sprite1 : int sprite := Sprite.New (pics (1)) sprite1 := Sprite.New (pics1 (1)) Sprite.SetPosition (sprite, 0, 100, false) Sprite.SetPosition (sprite1, 0, 100, false) Sprite.Show (sprite) Sprite.Show (sprite1) loop     loop         Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)         Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)         Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)         Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)         Draw.Oval (280, 222, 10, 10, green)         Draw.Oval (88, 222, 10, 10, white)         %Move the sprite across the screen         Sprite.Hide (sprite)         Sprite.SetPosition (sprite, +x1 + 50, y1 + 100, false)         Sprite.SetPosition (sprite1, +x + 250, y + 100, false)         Sprite.Show (sprite1)         Sprite.Show (sprite)         Input.KeyDown (keys)         drawfilloval (42, 60, 5, 5, blue)         drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, blue)         Draw.FillBox (638, 400, 458, 303, white)     %TP window         Draw.FillBox (638 + 8, 400 + 8, 458 + 8, 303 + 8, blue)     %TP window         Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy div 4 + 8, white)     %select window         Draw.FillBox (8, 8, maxx - 10, maxy div 4, blue)     %select window         Draw.ThickLine (170, 100, 170, 5, 5, white)         if keys (KEY_UP_ARROW) then             drawfilloval (42, 60, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, white)             position := 1         end if         if keys (KEY_DOWN_ARROW) then             drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 57, 5, 5, white)             position := 2         end if         if keys (KEY_RIGHT_ARROW) then             drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 57, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (26, 40, 5, 5, white)             position := 3         end if         if keys (KEY_LEFT_ARROW) then             drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 57, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (26, 40, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 25, 5, 5, white)             position := 4         end if         if keys (KEY_ENTER) then             if position = 1 then                 character2HP := character2HP - number1                 characterTP := characterTP + 10                 View.Update                 Draw.ThickLine (255, 117, 307, 188, 10, black)                 Draw.ThickLine (255, 117, 307, 188, 10 - 5, brightred)                 delay (800)                 Draw.ThickLine (310, 115, 250, 176, 10, black)                 Draw.ThickLine (310, 115, 250, 176, 10 - 5, brightred)                 Draw.Text (intstr ((number1)), 265, 203, font, white)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 exit             elsif characterHP < 1 then                 Draw.Text ("Game Over", 350, 280, font, white)                 exit when character2HP < 1                 exit             elsif position = 2 and characterMP > 1 then                 character2HP := character2HP - number2                 characterMP := characterMP - 10                 exit when character2HP < 1                 delay (200)                 View.Update                 Draw.FillOval (285, 145, 50, 50, black)                 Draw.FillOval (285, 145, 50 - 10, 50 - 10, purple)                 delay (800)                 Draw.ThickLine (285, 145, 288, 106, 5, black)                 delay (100)                 Draw.ThickLine (285, 145, 240, 150, 5, black)                 delay (100)                 Draw.ThickLine (285, 145, 326, 148, 5, black)                 delay (100)                 Draw.ThickLine (285, 145, 283, 194, 5, black)                 delay (100)                 Draw.ThickLine (285, 145, 317, 119, 5, black)                 delay (100)                 Draw.ThickLine (285, 145, 245, 123, 5, black)                 delay (100)                 Draw.ThickLine (285, 145, 252, 180, 5, black)                 delay (100)                 Draw.ThickLine (285, 145, 315, 180, 5, black)                 Draw.Text (intstr ((number2)), 265, 203, font, white)                 delay (1000)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 View.Update                 exit             elsif characterHP < 1 then                 Draw.Text ("Game Over", 350, 280, font, white)                 exit when character2HP < 1                 exit             elsif position = 3 and characterTP > 99 then                 character2HP := character2HP - characterTP * 10                 characterTP := characterTP - characterTP                 Draw.Text (intstr ((characterTP * 10)), 350, 280, font, white)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 View.Update             elsif characterHP < 1 then                 Draw.Text ("Game Over", 350, 280, font, white)                 exit when character2HP < 1                 Draw.ThickLine (255, 117, 307, 188, 10, black)                 Draw.ThickLine (255, 117, 307, 188, 10 - 5, brightred)                 delay (800)                 Draw.ThickLine (310, 115, 250, 176, 10, black)                 Draw.ThickLine (310, 115, 250, 176, 10 - 5, brightred)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 exit             elsif position = 4 and characterMP > 0 then                 characterHP := characterHP + 1000                 characterMP := characterMP - 15                 Draw.Text ("+1000", 60, 203, font, white)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 exit             end if         end if         var width : int := Font.Width ("Attack", font)         var height, ascent, descent, internalLeading : int         Draw.Text ("Attack", 50, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Magic", 50, 57, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Weapon Skill", 38, 37, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Healing", 50, 18, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Magus", 250, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text ("HP", 310, 80, font, white)     %HP         Draw.Text ("HP", 310, 57, font, white)     %HP         Draw.Text (intstr (characterHP), 350, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Cloud", 250, 57, font, white)         Draw.Text ("/9999", 400, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text (intstr (character2HP), 350, 57, font, white)         Draw.Text ("/9999", 400, 57, font, white)     %end of HP         Draw.Text ("MP", 550, 57, font, white)     %MP         Draw.Text ("MP", 550, 80, font, white)     %MP         Draw.Text (intstr (character2MP), 470, 57, font, white)         Draw.Text ("/100", 500, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text (intstr (characterMP), 470, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text ("/100", 500, 57, font, white)     %end of MP         Draw.Text ("/100", 600, 380, font, white)     %end of TP         Draw.Text ("/100", 600, 339, font, white)     %end of TP         Draw.Text ("Cloud", 490, 380, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Magus", 490, 340, font, white)         Draw.Text (intstr (characterTP), 570, 380, font, white)     %TP         Draw.Text (intstr (character2TP), 570, 339, font, white)     %TP         View.Update         var x6, y6, button : int         Mouse.Where (x6, y6, button)         Text.Locate (1, 1)         if button = 0 then             put x6 : 4, "  ", y6 : 4, "  button up"         else         end if     end loop     loop         Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)         Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)         Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)         Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)         Draw.Oval (88, 222, 10, 10, green)         Draw.Oval (280, 222, 10, 10, white)         %Move the sprite across the screen         Sprite.Hide (sprite)         Sprite.SetPosition (sprite, +x1 + 50, y1 + 100, false)         Sprite.SetPosition (sprite1, +x + 250, y + 100, false)         Sprite.Show (sprite1)         Sprite.Show (sprite)         Input.KeyDown (keys)         drawfilloval (42, 60, 5, 5, blue)         drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, blue)         Draw.FillBox (638, 400, 458, 303, white)     %TP window         Draw.FillBox (638 + 8, 400 + 8, 458 + 8, 303 + 8, blue)     %TP window         Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy div 4 + 8, white)     %select window         Draw.FillBox (8, 8, maxx - 10, maxy div 4, blue)     %select window         Draw.ThickLine (170, 100, 170, 5, 5, white)         if keys (KEY_UP_ARROW) then             drawfilloval (42, 60, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, white)             position := 1         end if         if keys (KEY_DOWN_ARROW) then             drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 57, 5, 5, white)             position := 2         end if         if keys (KEY_RIGHT_ARROW) then             drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 57, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (26, 40, 5, 5, white)             position := 3         end if         if keys (KEY_LEFT_ARROW) then             drawfilloval (42, 85, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 57, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (26, 40, 5, 5, blue)             drawfilloval (42, 25, 5, 5, white)             position := 4         end if         if keys ('o') then             put "Welcome to FF2006, using your up arrow key to attack, down to use magic, right to use tp moves, and left to heal yourself"         end if         if keys (KEY_ENTER) then             if position = 1 then     %atttack                 characterHP := characterHP - number1                 character2TP := character2TP + 10                 delay (200)                 View.Update                 Draw.ThickLine (57, 116, 121, 173, 10, black)                 Draw.ThickLine (57, 116, 121, 173, 10 - 5, brightred)                 delay (800)                 Draw.ThickLine (120, 114, 51, 175, 10, black)                 Draw.ThickLine (120, 114, 51, 175, 10 - 5, brightred)                 Draw.Text (intstr ((number1)), 60, 203, font, white)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 exit             elsif characterHP < 1 then                 Draw.Text ("Game Over", 350, 280, font, white)                 exit when characterHP < 1             elsif position = 2 and character2MP > 1 then                 characterHP := characterHP - number2                 character2MP := character2MP - 10                 exit when characterHP < 1                 delay (200)                 View.Update                 Draw.FillOval (88, 140, 35, 35, white)                 Draw.FillOval (88, 140, 35 - 10, 35 - 10, blue)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillOval (46, 173, 23, 23, white)                 Draw.FillOval (46, 173, 23 - 5, 23 - 5, blue)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillOval (130, 150, 23, 23, white)                 Draw.FillOval (130, 150, 23 - 5, 23 - 5, blue)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillOval (60, 130, 23, 23, white)                 Draw.FillOval (60, 130, 23 - 5, 23 - 5, blue)                 delay (800)                 Draw.Text (intstr ((number2)), 60, 203, font, white)                 delay (1000)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 exit             elsif character2HP < 1 then                 Draw.Text ("Game Over", 350, 280, font, white)                 exit when characterHP < 1                 View.Update             elsif position = 3 and character2TP > 99 then                 characterHP := characterHP - characterTP * 10                 character2TP := character2TP - character2TP                 Draw.Text (intstr ((character2TP * 10)), 60, 203, font, white)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 View.Update             elsif character2HP < 1 then                 Draw.Text ("Game Over", 350, 280, font, white)                 exit when character2HP < 1                 delay (200)                 exit             elsif position = 4 and character2MP > 0 then                 character2HP := character2HP + 1000                 character2MP := character2MP - 15                 Draw.Text ("+1000", 265, 203, font, white)                 delay (800)                 Draw.FillBox (0, 0, maxx, maxy, green)                 Draw.FillOval (57, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (110, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240, 322, 55, 50, white)                 Draw.FillOval (240 + 70, 322, 55, 50, white)                 exit             end if         end if         var width : int := Font.Width ("Attack", font)         var height, ascent, descent, internalLeading : int         Draw.Text ("Attack", 50, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Magic", 50, 57, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Weapon Skill", 38, 37, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Healing", 50, 18, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Magus", 250, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text ("HP", 310, 80, font, white)     %HP         Draw.Text ("HP", 310, 57, font, white)     %HP         Draw.Text (intstr (characterHP), 350, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Cloud", 250, 57, font, white)         Draw.Text ("/9999", 400, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text (intstr (character2HP), 350, 57, font, white)         Draw.Text ("/9999", 400, 57, font, white)     %end of HP         Draw.Text ("MP", 550, 57, font, white)     %MP         Draw.Text ("MP", 550, 80, font, white)     %MP         Draw.Text (intstr (character2MP), 470, 57, font, white)         Draw.Text ("/100", 500, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text (intstr (characterMP), 470, 80, font, white)         Draw.Text ("/100", 500, 57, font, white)     %end of MP         Draw.Text ("/100", 600, 380, font, white)     %end of TP         Draw.Text ("/100", 600, 339, font, white)     %end of TP         Draw.Text ("Cloud", 490, 380, font, white)         Draw.Text ("Magus", 490, 340, font, white)         Draw.Text (intstr (characterTP), 570, 380, font, white)     %TP         Draw.Text (intstr (character2TP), 570, 339, font, white)     %TP         View.Update         var x6, y6, button : int         Mouse.Where (x6, y6, button)         Text.Locate (1, 1)         if button = 0 then             put x6 : 4, "  ", y6 : 4, "  button up"         else         end if     end loop end loop