Computer Science Canada 5 min Sonnet |
| Author: | copthesaint [ Thu May 28, 2009 2:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | 5 min Sonnet |
My classmates saw my sonnet and think its awsome. I dont belive them ;p its cheesy to me, and I spent like no time on it.Is this accually a good sonnet? Btw I did wrote this accually in 7 min. ^^ tell me what you (who ever is reading this) think. Btw I am in grade 10 and Im doing poor in english! Hello, I'd like to say (a How the night came so soon (b And I am sad it's not day (a So I sit in the night doomed (b Evenings can be joyful (c But also bring sorrow (d And days are just wonderful (c I'm just waiting for tomorrow. (d I am crying over nothing (e Waiting for someone to save me (f I am following, overhanging (e Soon she will see (f Looming over a precipice (g I blow her one last kiss (g a precipice is a large vertical clift. |
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| Author: | saltpro15 [ Thu May 28, 2009 3:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | RE:5 min Sonnet |
nice, flows pretty well. solid quatrain structure and rhyme scheme, ending couplet is good. |
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| Author: | Tallguy [ Fri May 29, 2009 7:44 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: 5 min Sonnet |
not a sonnet but this is one i wrote, my friends sad is was good so here it is Hell on Earth Those aren?t just words, its reality The pain we?ve felt, the things we?ve seen Evil all around, growing ever more All feel the sweet kiss of this world That death baring sweetness Taste it, let if flow through your body Let it take its course As you see that blinding light You will see Hell on Earth check out my website for more http://av-poems.weebly.com |
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| Author: | copthesaint [ Fri May 29, 2009 11:02 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: 5 min Sonnet |
Dude How is that a sonnet? You must be confused. Here are a bunch of sites to learn hoe to write a sonnet. http://www.ehow.com/how_3335_write-sonnet.html http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Sonnet_poem_format http://www.answerbag.com/articles/How-to-Format-the-Spenserian-Sonnet/99ebbdf7-e76c-99c5-8356-90cc72b26319 I'd have more but there blocked at school. |
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| Author: | Tallguy [ Fri May 29, 2009 1:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: 5 min Sonnet |
Tallguy wrote: not a sonnet but this is one i wrote, my friends sad is was good so here it is check out my website for more http//av-poems.weebly.com |
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| Author: | apomb [ Fri May 29, 2009 1:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | RE:5 min Sonnet |
your link directs to a wikipedia article about HTTP... |
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