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r.m_spy

Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:16 pm


jump lame game

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the variables mean nothing, And I do not know how to tag

const SPACE_BAR : char:=chr(32)
var wer:int:=0
var k : array char of boolean
var name:string
var v:int:=10
var u:int:=500
var w:int:=250
var tel:int:=0
var c:int:=100
const UP_ARROW := chr (200)
const ENTER := chr (10)
var l:int:=0
var d:int:=0
procedure check
colorback(black)
color(white)
if v60 then
if w0 then 
cls 
colorback(white)
color(black)
drawfill(1,1,white,red)
put"game over"
put"your score was ",l
loop
end loop
end if
end if
if v14
end loop
end if
if s=304 then
else
  CentreFont ("jump : level 2", maxx div 2, maxy div 2, announceFont, brightred)
  delay(1000)
loop
loop
loop
delay(c)
cls
check2
put l,"    (pasword is 208)"
drawfillbox(w,90,w+40,50,grey)
drawfillbox(10,v,50,v+40,brightred)
drawfillbox(u,10,u+40,50,grey)
Input.KeyDown(k)
if k(UP_ARROW) then
loop
delay(c)
cls
put l
drawfillbox(u,10,u+40,50,grey)
drawfillbox(10,v,50,v+40,brightred)
drawfillbox(w,90,w+40,50,grey)
v:=v+10
w:=w-10
u:=u-10
check2
exit when v=110
end loop
loop
delay(c)
cls
put l
drawfillbox(u,10,u+40,50,grey)
drawfillbox(10,v,50,v+40,brightred)
drawfillbox(w,90,w+40,50,grey)
v:=v-10
u:=u-10
w:=w-10
check2
exit when v=10
end loop
end if
u:=u-10
w:=w-10
exit when u10 then
c:=c-5
else
c:=c+95
end if
end loop
end loop
end if



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Ultrahex

Sat Dec 01, 2007 2:44 pm


Re: jump lame game

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 The Good 

Simple Idea for Game Easy To Play, other then that I am sorry to say there is not much. the rest is ideas if you wish to make your game play better, or the game overall more interactive with the user.

 The Bad 

Ontop of this, yes your variable names are terrible, and pointless delays at start are very annoying for people running your programming, they are waiting 5 seconds just to begin playing your game!, 

Also your not stating that your input has to be numbers at skip level, which is a hassle cause i had to look at your code to figure out what to type in. this is problem because you are not specifying valid input to that screen and not catching invalid input. Why not make a menu in which you select Play Game! or Enter Secret Code instead?

There is also much more work that can be done on this game!, for instance: Powerups, Faster, Less Flicker, Smoother GamePlay!
All of these can be easily accomplished by instead of using delays, you could use max frames per second.
Oh and i forgot you didn't comment your code at all!

 Leftover Issues 

Tagging is simple!, all you must do is:


Turing Code Here
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r.m_spy

Sat Dec 01, 2007 3:33 pm


Re: jump lame game

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to poster

thank you for your support. the programs I posted has already been created. [code]
how it's done[code/]


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Saad

Sat Dec 01, 2007 4:44 pm


RE:jump lame game

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Just because a program has been created doesn't mean it can't be edited to reflect good programming techniques.


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LaZ3R

Mon Dec 03, 2007 2:08 pm


RE:jump lame game

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Don't make your user wait 5 seconds each time they want to play. 

In the turing help menu, search up View.Update. Any graphic based games in turing really need it as it prevents flickering from occuring on the screen. Much more easy on the eyes :)

Also, you're code is practically impossible to debug for yourself should something go wrong. Use proc's... a lot of them. They are very helpful in so many ways and keep everything organized. 

You have a lot of repeating code as well, cases like those, once again, really prove you should be using procs. Keeps the code much smaller, much more effective, much easier to fix should something go wrong.